Author: Nidhi_Singh Posted: Wed Feb 03, 2010 6:41 am (GMT -8) osirus0830 wrote: ” is linked with the number of people visiting city’s art museums.” I think you should say “linked to” “However, the author’s argument may well have merit” Try to avoid being wishy washy with the “may well have merit”. Instead, say something like, “However, the author’s argument could be strengthened” “The premise that 15% more residents responded to the poll as was conducted 5 years ago is loosely based.” This sentence isn’t clear. Say something like, “The value of a poll in which fifteen percent more residents responded to the poll this year than the number of residents that responded to a similar poll conducted 5 years ago is questionable.” “In addition, the author makes several assumptions which remain unproven in his claim.” In this case use “that”, rather than “which”

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GMAT Essays (AWA) :: RE: Hi..Please review & rate the Analysis of an Argument.